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Tuesday, 31 August 2010

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Events that change me
                       
                                                            The event that change me                            Henry P.5
            The one event that changed me since I was in 5th grade was going to AIS because I was pretty mature when I was went to other school but then when I studied at AIS I had so much fun and I forgot about studying and I got a bad grade; just only 1.87, that really sucks right.
             At home, I didn’t study much at home just only play and being lazy every time when my parents ask me to do something like clean my house and do my homework I just only ignore my parents words and go hang out with my friends when the school end and at school I didn’t pay attention much to what the teachers saying and I sit there and talk to my friend and draw stuff on my notebook, so my parents yell at me and grounded for two months of playing ne-height: 200%;">
             At home, I didn’t study much at home just only play and being lazy every time when my parents ask me to do something like clean my house and do my homework I just only ignore my parents words and go hang out with my friends when the school end and at school I didn’t pay attention much to what the teachers saying and I sit there and talk to my friend and draw stuff on my notebook, so my parents yell at me and grounded for two months of playing games. End of two months, I understand I became a little smarter, I felt pretty guilty because I disrespect my parent and my teacher I just look into playing and don’t do anything. But I make it up to my parents I study harder everyday and then end of the semester one I got 2.84 and my parents was pretty proud of me.
            In 7th grade, I think I’ll be more mature than last year. In the summer, I been study more than I think so I forgot everything and I study too hard I that I forgot, I play a lot in the summer like hanging out with my friends and go to America to play sky diving, it was pretty fun but when I came back to school I forgot stuff a lot, in 7th grade year I less talk to my friend and study more hard but there one class that I have to kill myself is Chinese because it was so hard like all the line was everywhere in my head, every quiz in Chinese I always got low score and I can’t believe in the first quarter I got a very bad school in Chinese, so my parents hired a Chinese tutor to teach so when the end of semester 1, I got a better score than last quarter. So I get a use of Chinese and I really happy. Everything is changing in my life.
            In the summer, I was thinking about dancing because I saw the video that my friends send me and I know I’m not that good of a dancer, so the whole summer I was thinking about doing a dance for the talent show, it will be very cool if you see our dance and you will know how cool it is. I went to Singapore for about 6 days and I learn how to break dance and I will perform some break dance on stage.
            In 8th grade I will be cooler than ever and less talking, I hope this year will be a better year than all of the year that I study in AIS. I will push everything that I can to the next semester because I’m will leave for America; I have too not wanted to. I wish that I can stay for the whole year but I can’t. I feel so sad; I will be with my friend and teacher more this year. I hope, everyone will respect me, I will respect them back.  The event that scare me the most and make me brave is when I go skydiving with my parents and it was very fun, it felt like I'm in heaven and falling to hell, I feel the in my hair, it felt so cool, I ride the airplane to the sky about 4000 meter up to the sky and then the pilot ask us to wear on our parachute and goggles then the plane open the bottom part of the plane and then all of the crew jump already except for me and my dad because we are too scared of height so when the pilot say: “Jump, you will know how fun is it.” My dad Think about it and then he jump and scream like a girl and then when we almost land my dad pull the thing for the parachute to fly out and then we was pull back very hard so that we pretty scared when the parachute pull out. So when we land everyone claps their hand for us. It was a heck of a experienced, it was pretty cool and my dad thinking that we going to do it again in the summer and we did it in Los Angeles, California. I hope this year is fun as the other year. Thank you

1 comment:

  1. Pretty interesting stuff Hank but there are so many topics here. You need to narrow your focus. It sounds like the conflict is with your study skills. Focus on that and limit yourself to one event. You might talk about how receiving below a 2.0 gpa changed you, or maybe you will talk about how having a tutor changed you. However, you can't talk about all of the them. You're limited to one event to help you focus on developing your story with strong descriptive language and details.

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